Athletics Day

Yesterday was fun because it was Athletics Day Yesterday I was so tired because all of the sprints and running and jumping my favorite activity on Athletics was Long jump and Long distance I'm really bad at High jump I keep failing High jump, Long jump is actually not that hard, long distances was not hard I was tired on Long distance after we finished Long distances we had a break after we had a break we 

did discus but I didn't throw harder, shot put was fun but the ball was heavy and it's hard to throw

sprints is amazing and I don't really know what place I am but it was great I didn't know I was fourth places I think I don't have any Idea what place I am on Sprints but it was fun. When I get home I was so tired about the Athletics day and I didn't sleep early.

Loch Ness Monster

W.A.L.T create a model that shares something we have learnt about our mystery.

This is my mystery about the Loch Ness Monster and me and Jhyrnelle finished our Loch Ness Monster and we put some facts and theories and the middle of the Loch Ness Monster and we painted an Island of the Loch Ness Monster.

The Present

W.A.L.T:  Write a narrative

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• The title is suitable for the text.

• The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
• The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
• The resolution explains how the problem was solved.
• Seeks feedback and makes changes to texts to improve clarity and meaning.

In Ako Ngatahi we had to write a narrative about a video. It was about a boy opening a present that was a dog with three legs. Here is the video of the present. I hope you enjoy my story.

The Present

The present

One sunny day I was gaming and my mom went home and she bought a present for me and she put the present on the table and mom said go open your present I was excited when I opened it up, it was a puppy then I saw his one leg then I threw him away  and he came back and I kicked  him away and he saw a red ball bang!!! He bomp on the cabin.  He trying to get the ball out  underneath the cabin and i watched the dog was  having fun playing with the red ball and the ball went on my foot so i grab the ball and went outside and we play threw the ball the end