W.A.L.T: Write a narrative
Success Criteria
I know I will be successful when….
- The title is suitable for the text.
- The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
- The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
- The resolution explains how the problem was solved.
- Seeks feedback and makes changes to texts to improve clarity and meaning.
In Ako Ngatahi we had to write a narrative about a video. It was about a boy opening a present that was a dog with three legs. Here is the video of the present. I hope you enjoy my story.
The present
One sunny day I was gaming and my mom went home and she bought a present for me and she put the present on the table and mom said go open your present I was excited when I opened it up, it was a puppy then I saw his one leg then I threw him away and he came back and I kicked him away and he saw a red ball bang!!! He bomp on the cabin. He trying to get the ball out underneath the cabin and i watched the dog was having fun playing with the red ball and the ball went on my foot so i grab the ball and went outside and we play threw the ball the end
