Writing a song!

Hello everyone! So today I wrote a song It was hard and complicated because you need a lot Inspirations for it. For My song I made a rap I got inspired by many famous people who sing and rap, I tried to make a rap song I don't think it's good but I tried.
Here is the rap that I did.

Song

Verse 1 

Hey, I'mma start running my bag it's full of a honey,

Dreaming what you wish Gotta leave it all behind,

Saying what you wanna know,Imma hit Bang Bang.

Verse 2

Saying my name at the back door, 

I'mma go ring ring hand check to the top to the bottum,

Oh let me hear you say it again.

Chorus 

I'mma runnin keep on runnin 

tell I get in the end

Run Run Run, I'll hit check bang.

That's all I know it not that good but I tried and the rap might feel weird to you all but I tried and plus It's  hard to make it because you need a lot of inspiration to it.

A metaphor is a figure of speech in which a word or phrase is applied to an object or action to which it is not literally applicable (example I am titanium)

A simile is a figure of speech involving the comparison of one thing with another (example brave as a lion).