Spencer park

W.A.L.T Write an information report that informs the audience.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• I use an opening statement that explains the subject of the report.

• The opening statement is followed by sentences that describe the event; what you saw, what you did, how you felt, what you learnt.
• Each paragraph focuses on a different aspect of the topic; travelling, the beach, the lagoon walk, playground.
• A general statement about the topic usually rounds off the report.

The trip to the Spencer park

Last Friday Ako Ngatahi travelled to Spencer Park to have some fun and learn about new things. I sat with Skyler on the bus and we we’re talking in the bus.

When we arrived at Spencer Park, first we played on the playground. I went on the swings.

Then we walked to the lagoon. We saw a bird lookout and horses. The bird was white and short, with a long beak. The horses were brown and tall.

Next, we went to the beach. We picked up sea shells and they were white and round.

Then we went on the playground and had our lunch. I had carrots and watermelon.

Finally, we went on the bus and me and Alliah talked about music, then about siblings and about funny stuff. I was tired when I arrived at the school.  

I’ve learned about the horse, seashells and the bird look out.