Nettiquette

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among the hidden Character collection

W.A.L.T is to create a model about a character collection

Skyler and Lyan, and I made a clay and it's about a among the hidden novel character collection we made a laptop and the book and a fake I.D and a brown bag and clay money. after we Finnish making the character collection. we put it in a paper and then we put information in the paper and design it we put are name in the orange paper and I think me and Skyler and lyan did a pretty good job making it.

this is are picture making a character collection .

in the Finnish object.

Partly cloudly

W.A.L.T:

I know I will be successful when I can…..

• Write Your first person diary entry.

• Use a range of language features.
• Express ideas in correct paragraphs.
• Expand on ideas and use interesting sentence starters.

Partly Cloudy

The sky was blue like the sea, the birds were flying in the sky. the cloud are soft and fluffy like a bunny the cloud where making some animal to the humans to make them happy, the birds were carrying a white bag there was one grey cloud. he was lonely he tried to make a puppy but he make a baby crocodile and he started playing at the crocodile the bird came and the crocodile started eating the bird head the next day the bird came the grey cloud give the bird a the bighorn sheep keep hitting the bird and the next day the grey cloud trying to make a baby sheep,he make a hedgehog the bird touch the hedgehog the bird grab the hedgehog and fly away when the bird came the grey cloud started to make a baby shark. The bird fly away to another cloud. The grey cloud was angry there was lightning the bird came and the bird had some costume with a white bag. The grey cloud hug the bird the grey cloud make a electric eel and the cloud was happy The end.
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