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Monday, May 23, 2016

My worst day ever

W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.

Success Criteria
I know I will be successful when my recount has a

  • Title
  • Orientation:  When? Who? Where? Why?
  • Sequence of events:  What happened? Describe using the senses (hear, taste, see, smell and feel).
  • Personal Comment:  How did the events make you feel?

           First Draft

My Worst Day Ever

It was nice and sunny day and my mom  and daddy buffalo and the me was go for run and went for drink and go back home. The bad lion tries to get the me  and eat them and here come the rest of them. The crocodile came out of the water and the me fall over the water and mom buffalo was fall me  out of water.