I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
hi jolly this is Sofia i really like your video and i really love that you and Zayd have a turn of saying it,i did learn a bit more about Volcano and by the way good job.
Great DLO Jolly-rose Your video was amazing and you taught me that lava can reach 50 degrees celibates from a volcano erupt I never knew that it was that hot. Next time could you put the recipes on you post.
Hi Jolly Rose I really like your video about volcanoes, I like the way you and Zayd speech and show volcano explode, you did a good job, but next time you should be put some more detail about your post and Information like what did you learn?, if it is challenging and of course W.A.L.T. (We are learning to...), anyway you did a great job Jolly Rose!
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hi jolly this is Sofia i really like your video and i really love that you and Zayd have a turn of saying it,i did learn a bit more about Volcano and by the way good job.
ReplyDeleteGreat DLO Jolly-rose Your video was amazing and you taught me that lava can reach 50 degrees celibates from a volcano erupt I never knew that it was that hot. Next time could you put the recipes on you post.
ReplyDeleteHi Jolly Rose I really like your video about volcanoes, I like the way you and Zayd speech and show volcano explode, you did a good job, but next time you should be put some more detail about your post and Information like what did you learn?, if it is challenging and of course W.A.L.T. (We are learning to...), anyway you did a great job Jolly Rose!
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