I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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Hey Jolly Rose
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Hi Jolly Rose, I really like your work! The information are really nice and I like how you added some information about yourself. The only thing you're lacking is that you need to put pictures and some more information. But overall it is a very good blog! I hope you keep up the good work!
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