I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
W.A.L.T: is to make a comic and I put the picture of a slides show in it is all about a boy that not allowed to be seen and always stay at home next time I well put lots of writing I hope you like it bye!!
What's up Jolly?. I like your drawing it's really cool, but you have one mistake, it's on your title its says "among the hidden". You need a capital letter on the word "among" and "hidden". Because "Among the Hidden is the story, anyway keep up the good work and have a great day bye.
Hi Jolly Rose! I really like your drawing but you have one mistake because you do not have to paint your drawing but still very beautiful drawing,anyway it's okay and good work have nice day.
Hi Jolly Rose , I really like your story and your drawings are really cool . Next time maybe you should make the text bigger so that it is easier to read .
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What's up Jolly?. I like your drawing it's really cool, but you have one mistake, it's on your title its says "among the hidden".
ReplyDeleteYou need a capital letter on the word "among" and "hidden". Because "Among the Hidden is the story, anyway keep up the good work and have a great day bye.
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DeleteHi skyler I will put a capital letter in the Among the Hidden
Deleteand thanks for telling me that.
Hi Jolly Rose!
ReplyDeleteI really like your drawing but you have one mistake because you do not have to paint your drawing but still very beautiful drawing,anyway it's okay and good work have nice day.
Hi Jolly Rose ,
ReplyDeleteI really like your story and your drawings are really cool . Next time maybe you should make the text bigger so that it is easier to read .
Thanks Nikita for feedback maybe next time I will make sure that I will make the text bigger.
Deletethanks jhyrnelle for commenting in my blog and by the way have a great day
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