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Friday, July 29, 2016

My Worst Day Ever

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My worst day ever


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My mom was going to walk to get some food and they tried to look carefully for crocodile  and lion so they get a fruit and get back home  quickly and we run quickly so the crocodile won’t get us so my mom run fast when we run I felt I am sick that time so that's when I feel scared

And I’m imagine then I saw my dad at my house and I can see the crocodile sleeping and I can see lion as sleep to so that we be careful to walk back out of are house.and we cook and me was reading and I us my mom if I'm  aloud to go outside and my mom said no and I went to my room and imagine  that  time that was I'm scared and I feel I'm not scared that was the only scared.

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