My friend is Hanna. and I like foot ball. and we are spy Hanna and I like. spying to help them but Hanna said
we like to help some people yeah sure I like. to someone need help how can you tell cell phone of curse
don't worry we will. save your cats thank you your. welcome maybe we don't need. a spy costumes yeah sure we love a super hero. costumes
the end
thanks for reading.
I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, August 5, 2016
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Hi JollyRoser, I realy like your story,and I think you need some fall stops and comeis in your story. Did you have fun writing your story?
ReplyDeleteHi jolly Rose,i really like your story but like Blessing said you forgot to
ReplyDeleteput full stops at your story and on the end off you story.
Hi Jolly I'm from templeton School and you need to get your spelling right. Full stops as well because your story doesn't make sense.
ReplyDeletehi jolly this is alliah your story i really like your story but like said sofia you have not full stop. but no make sense
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