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Friday, August 5, 2016

The spy with her friend

My friend is Hanna. and I like foot ball. and we are spy Hanna and I like. spying to help them but Hanna said
we like to help some people yeah sure I like. to someone need help how can you tell cell phone of curse
don't worry we will. save your cats thank you your. welcome maybe we don't need. a spy costumes yeah sure we love a super hero. costumes




the end
thanks for reading.

4 comments:

  1. Hi JollyRoser, I realy like your story,and I think you need some fall stops and comeis in your story. Did you have fun writing your story?

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  2. Hi jolly Rose,i really like your story but like Blessing said you forgot to
    put full stops at your story and on the end off you story.

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  3. Hi Jolly I'm from templeton School and you need to get your spelling right. Full stops as well because your story doesn't make sense.

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  4. hi jolly this is alliah your story i really like your story but like said sofia you have not full stop. but no make sense

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