I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
W.A.L.T create a model that shares something we have learnt about our mystery.
This is my mystery about the Loch Ness Monster and me and Jhyrnelle finished our Loch Ness Monster and we put some facts and theories and the middle of the Loch Ness Monster and we painted an Island of the Loch Ness Monster.
Hi Jolly, Your Loch Ness Monster is colorful, you have some mistakes on your Loch Ness Monster,first you might want to put more detail on your Loch Ness Monster because it doesn't look like a monster, second the picture you're not looking on the camera, you're looking up, third it's "Loch Ness Monster Mystery" not "Loch Ness Monster". Fourth your labels you have put " 2017, create, mystery, term 2", you might want to put "Term 2 2017, Create A Model about our mystery", anyway keep up the good work.
Hi Jolly Rose! I really like your drawing Loch Ness Monster but there one mistake because i cant not see you said about the Loch Ness,second you are not looking at the picture because you are looking for something,but it's that's okay and have a nice day bye.
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Hi Jolly, Your Loch Ness Monster is colorful, you have some mistakes on your Loch Ness Monster,first you might want to put more detail on your Loch Ness Monster because it doesn't look like a monster, second the picture you're not looking on the camera, you're looking up, third it's "Loch Ness Monster Mystery" not "Loch Ness Monster".
ReplyDeleteFourth your labels you have put " 2017, create, mystery, term 2", you might want to put "Term 2 2017, Create A Model about our mystery", anyway keep up the good work.
Hi Jolly Rose!
ReplyDeleteI really like your drawing Loch Ness Monster but there one mistake because i cant not see you said about the Loch Ness,second you are not looking at the picture because you are looking for something,but it's that's okay and have a nice day bye.