I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hey there Jolly!, what's up?. I like your DLO but you don't have enough information or description and your recording is too noisy but you did good. Keep it up.
Hey Jolly, I'm commenting on your blog again because I just noticed that your label isn't right you might want to put "Term 2 2017, Maths DLO about Time" because people won't know when you made this DLO, anyway keep it up and have a great day bye.
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Hey there Jolly!, what's up?. I like your DLO but you don't have enough information or description and your recording is too noisy but you did good. Keep it up.
ReplyDeletehi skyler thanks for the comment next time I will put a information and I will record somewhere that is not noisy.
ReplyDeleteHey Jolly, I'm commenting on your blog again because I just noticed that your label isn't right you might want to put "Term 2 2017, Maths DLO about Time" because people won't know when you made this DLO, anyway keep it up and have a great day bye.
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