I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Jolly, I like your poster but there were some mistakes, first you could make your poster bigger because I couldn't see it much, second you didn't put your WALT, third your description, fourth you have to put "Extravaganza Poster, Term 3 2017" on your label, fifth you didn't put much detail. Anyway keep up the good work, have great day, bye.
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Hi Jolly, I like your poster but there were some mistakes, first you could make your poster bigger because I couldn't see it much, second you didn't put your WALT, third your description, fourth you have to put "Extravaganza Poster, Term 3 2017" on your label, fifth you didn't put much detail. Anyway keep up the good work, have great day, bye.
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