I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Jolly Rose, I like how you explained who are Greenpeace and what do they do. This really help me to get to know Greenpeace more but if you could add photos or video about Greenpeace or make your slide more colourful it will make your slide have more attention and more attractive. This is all for now but overall this is good! I hope you keep up your good work!
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Hi Jolly Rose, I like how you explained who are Greenpeace and what do they do. This really help me to get to know Greenpeace more but if you could add photos or video about Greenpeace or make your slide more colourful it will make your slide have more attention and more attractive. This is all for now but overall this is good! I hope you keep up your good work!
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