I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
W,A,L,T: to finish this story about a cloud
this is a story about a cloud video that we watched and I worked so hard to finish this and I've done well because I finished the story about cloud
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Hi Jolly Rose this is Alliah and we did this writing last month and you had a good work and you work hard for this and I think your writing is cool.
ReplyDeletethanks guys for commenting in my blog bye!!
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